Friday, June 12, 2015

W7-writing

                      I think people shouldn’t kill any animal.


I think people should not kill any animals because there wouldn’t be any
dairy products and there would be no more comfy pillows or blankets. We would have to sleep on hard rocks and itchy pieces of hard mud.


Without things to keep us living when all of the animals are gone, what will there be for us? All there will be is a cat in a grave, with your favorite picture by it’s side.  


So why? Why kill animals? Do you really want your absolute favorite animal to be extinct for the rest of your life? What if everyone kills all of the animals and the whole world goes nuts!! Then soon everyone will start eating each other then soon the whole world would be extinct.

And that's why we shouldn’t hunt or kill any animal.

I am blogging this because I've done really well with the success criteria and that I made some mistakes but then I fixed them all up.

We were learning to write an opinion about killing animals or not killing animals. We had to pick one side, then we had to write about it.

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